The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012,2014 and 2016.

The table below gives information about the amount of beef exported in five different countries in 2012,2014 and 2016.
The table gives information concerning quantities of
beefs
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exported in 5 countries in 2012, 2014 and 2016.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Brazil exported more beef than
Japan
, Switzerland, Norway, and Uruguay combined.
Moreover
, it is noticeable that
Japan
's
exporting
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almost quadrupled over the 4-year
period
. Looking at the table more closely, one can see that
Japan
and Brazil showed an upward trend throughout the
period
. Brazil ranks
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first
in
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five countries, and
Japan
ranks
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third over the 4-year
period
. Uruguay marked the second position in exporting beef throughout the
period
,
represently
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representing
44,372
tonnes
in 2012 and 42,310
tonnes
in 2016. It declined by about 5,000
tonnes
between 2012 and 2014, but it increased again by about roughly 3,000
tonnes
.
On the other hand
, Switzerland and Norway exported a fee
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which were less than 100
tonnes
in the given
period
. The figures
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Switzerland and Norway went up and down for 4 years.
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