You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter •describe th problem with the equipment •explain how this problem is affecting your work •say what you want the shop or company to do.

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Dear

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madam

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, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the

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that I recently purchased

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your internet site. I hope your reply to

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letter will come soon. Three months ago I bought

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from your store it was something I really needed for my work but now it is working. I really need

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right now so please take it back a new one or fix it. I work as a teacher and now I teach online,that's why I need

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so that my students can hear me well and understand me when I teach. I have an online seminar with my students next week , but the

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I received are not working right now.

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why these

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are so important to me, I am worried that I won't be able to do my seminar will because my

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are not working for me. I read

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policy and

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, I am allowed to ask for a replacement of the item. I request you to replace the

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I bought with a new one and I hope you can finish

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work soon. If you continue to ignore my letter and do not replace the

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, I will be forced to take drastic measures against you. Yours faithfully

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

218 words

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