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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates that some anthropology students graduated from a university after they finished their undergraduate degree course. The table below gives information about the percentages of how much
salaries
 those graduates can earn after 5
years’
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work
 experience.
Overall
, we can see that over half of students start to do a full-time job after graduation, and the other sectors account for less percentages.
According to
 the table below, after five years
work
 period, those graduates who
work
 in the government earn the highest
salaries
 on average,
by contrast
, part of the graduates who
work
 at private companies earn lower
salaries
.
It is clear that
 many people choose to do a full-time job(accounts for 52%), and other kinds of
work
 type account for 15% to 8%.
However
, we can see that those people who have part-time
work
 and studying the postgraduate degree course at the same time only occupy 5%. After 5 years period, almost half of the Government sector and Freelance consultants can earn the highest
salaries
(over $100,000), 40% and 50% respectively,
while
 those people who
work
 at private companies earn lesser
salaries
.
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