Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Medical Professionals should be accountable to teach their clients ways to enhance their

health

. I agree with the statement fully, as I believe that it is the duty of a doctor to provide rational reasoning as there are many false perceptions being floated on social media regarding

health

and fitness, plus it's in the best interest of the general public regarding a healthier environment to live in for

everyone

. To start with, many social media influencers and sites have been fostering the general public regarding

health

and fitness methods.

Everyone

has a different perception, applying something which could have benefited them to

everyone

who watches their video or message. Put simply,

this

general perception can be harmful to many, as they lack proper scientific and medical methods, and most are based on outdated ways.

For instance

, many bloggers on YouTube are guiding people on vitamin intake with basic information regarding

this

subject. In

this

regard, doctors hold a paramount responsibility to tackle each patient individually, knowing their medical history, and guiding them cogently in refining themselves,

instead

of looking up things on the internet with lacking evidence.

Secondly

, physicians can help build up a healthier society for

everyone

to live in.

This

can only be possible if they emphasize

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creating an amusing environment for

thier

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their

patients to engage on any topic regarding

health

and fitness.

In other words

, be

accessable

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accessible

to

everyone

and share

fruitfull

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fruitful

benefits. In my viewpoint, a healthier environment is beneficial for the country,

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economy and social development. To

elloborate

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elaborate

, if a community is healthier

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will perform better both socially and economically, having less stress, less pressure,

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crimes and most importantly increased work production. Take

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example, New

Zealand

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economy has spiked up recently

due to

a surge in their work productivity.