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you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you don't fully agree with this opinion. say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers offer to give guided tour of your twon to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
 to express my disappointment about some parts of the article, which you published in your newspaper
last
 week. The article was about town centres in my country, India. I agree with most of the information
such
 as the presence of Ganesh idols in the middle, which are usually surrounded by small flower pots.
Apart from
this
, we do have a local bus stand,
small
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 garden and a landscape painting of the scenery. Most of the cities have the same structure,
however
, my town is a bit unique.
Firstly
,
while
 waiting for
bus
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, we have benches installed for the individuals.
Secondly
, we have a small cafe which plays live music and entertains the visitors.
Lastly
, our city has
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kids-zone
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 where children could play games
such
 as box cricket, badminton, and table tennis. Would you be kind enough to pay a visit to my town? I would be happy to guide you and show you various interesting parts of my city. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Anjali Patel
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