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Some people think the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals to protect themselves. Discuss both sides

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People have different
perspective
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 on whether
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government
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goverment
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government
 should be responsible for crime prevention or the
citizens
 have to take
the
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accountability to protect themselves.
While
 it is
ofte
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often
 that crime prevention must be from the
responsibility'government
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responsibility government
, others consider that it is on the
responsibility'individuals
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responsibility individuals
 to protect themselves. On the one hand, it is believed by some that the
goverment
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government
 should take the
responsibility
 to protect its
citizens
. The major reason for
this
 is, the
goverment
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government
 has the authority to implement strict rules and influence people's
situation
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 and opinions. Another reason is that the
offenses
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offences
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 are vast social issues and
hence
 it is very difficult to handle them on an individual level.
On the other hand
,
although
 the
goverment
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government
 has the power,
citizens
 must protect themselves on their own
due to
 it is not possible that cops or other guards can't be around everyone all the time,
citizens
 can avoid most
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offenses by being alert of their surroundings. Another reason is some crimes occur without strong and consistent
evidences
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evidence
pieces of evidence
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 which
mean
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means
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 that
citizens
 must learn
self-defense
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self-defence
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 art and realize the importance of self-protection. In conclusion, many people think that
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
 should take
the
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accountability for crime prevention,
whereas
 others say that avoiding crimes should be a personal
responsibility
.
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