Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of the goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Environmental issues are the rising

concerns

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in the world forum . Much of

debates

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about responsibility

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between suppliers or customers in reducing packaging goods. A sector of

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society

believe

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that producers and supermarkets should be held accountable whilst others suppose that consumers have a big contribution by avoiding purchasing

much

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packaging

products

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. From my perspective,

i

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presume that both producers and buyers should share equal parts in protecting the

environment

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. On the one hand , there are some justifications

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been proved manufacturers might have some key roles in reducing packaging

products

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.

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suppliers should innovate and come up with

products

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with

environmental

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friendly alternative materials which

are recycle

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are recycled

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and biodegradable

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as paper ,

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and plant-based

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. If even it is released into the

environment

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after

using

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, it could be

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decomposed

itself

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without harmful to the

environment

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.

Secondly

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, the charge in packaging is

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the

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feasible approach to minimize customers using excessive plastic

bag

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bags

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. Indeed ,the majority of people always constitute on sth with their price , so in order to pay for packaging they will have a sense of waste money which lead to

eliminate

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eliminating

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buying them, resulting in reducing the amount of waste

ends

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that ends

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up at landfills.

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, purchasers

also

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take charge

in

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preservation

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the preservation

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nature

environment

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. New habits developed daily will make a remarkable difference.

For instance

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,

by

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bringing their own bag

while

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shopping could limit packages back to their home .

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, they should buy the

products

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with

least

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the least

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packaging

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as organic food rather than too much covering . Ideally, buyers should head to flea

market

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markets

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with direct sales without any containerization as opposed to supermarkets where always use covering on their goods . In conclusion, both suppliers and customers should have equal responsibility in reducing packaging and protecting our

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environment

environmen

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environment