The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
The given tables show the comparison of different categories of
revenue
of 5 Europe nations in 1999 and in 2004.
It is noticeable that the sales
of coffee
in the 5 countries grew over the period provided. In addition
, the revenue
of bananas in the UK, Switzerland, and Denmark went up, while
for Belgium and Sweden, they went down.
In the initial year, revenue
of Add an article
the revenue
coffee
in Switzerland was 3 million
Euro
, 2 times higher than that in the UK, followed by a remarkable increase to 6 million
Euro
and 20 million
Euro
respectively in the final year. Besides
, coffee
was sold with the highest total sales
. Furthermore
, the sales
of bananas which were sold in the
Switzerland started at 1 Correct article usage
apply
million
Euro
, less than 15 times revenue
in the UK in 1999. The year 2004 witnessed a sharp climb to 5.5 Correct article usage
the revenue
million
Euro
and 47 million
Euro
in order.
A more detailed look at the tables illustrate
that there was a slight rise in the Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrates
sales
of coffee
in Sweden, Belgium, and Denmark, ranked from 1 million
Euro
to 2 million
Euro
in 2004. Meanwhile, revenue
of bananas in Denmark was Add an article
the revenue
in
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on
the
upward trend from 0.6 Correct article usage
an
million
Euro
in 1999 to 4 million
Euro
in 2004. Both Belgium and Sweden, in contrast
, have the
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apply
revenue
which declined around
1 Change preposition
by around
million
Euro
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