The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
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The given tables show the comparison of different categories of
revenue
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of 5 Europe nations in 1999 and in 2004. It is noticeable that the
sales
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of
coffee
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in the 5 countries grew over the period provided.
In addition
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, the
revenue
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of bananas in the UK, Switzerland, and Denmark went up,
while
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for Belgium and Sweden, they went down. In the initial year,
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revenue
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the revenue
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of
coffee
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in Switzerland was 3
million
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Euro
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, 2 times higher than that in the UK, followed by a remarkable increase to 6
million
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Euro
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and 20
million
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Euro
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respectively in the final year.
Besides
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,
coffee
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was sold with the highest total
sales
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.
Furthermore
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, the
sales
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of bananas which were sold in
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Switzerland started at 1
million
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Euro
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, less than 15 times
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revenue
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the revenue
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in the UK in 1999. The year 2004 witnessed a sharp climb to 5.5
million
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Euro
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and 47
million
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Euro
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in order. A more detailed look at the tables
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that there was a slight rise in the
sales
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of
coffee
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in Sweden, Belgium, and Denmark, ranked from 1
million
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Euro
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to 2
million
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Euro
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in 2004. Meanwhile,
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revenue
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the revenue
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of bananas in Denmark was
in
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on
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the
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an
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upward trend from 0.6
million
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Euro
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in 1999 to 4
million
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Euro
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in 2004. Both Belgium and Sweden,
in contrast
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, have
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revenue
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which declined
around
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1
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Euro
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Vocabulary: Replace the words revenue, sales, coffee, million, euro with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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