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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There has been much discussion surrounding
taxes
. It is believed that parents of children attending private
shools
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 have no responsibility to pay levies that support the state
education
 system. Personally, I totally disagree with
this
 idea
due to
 some reasons There are some differences
of
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 reducing
taxes
 for
people
 who choose private
schools
.
Firstly
, it is
such
 a challenge to calculate the amount of tax discount.
This
 is because if
people
 have to pay
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separated
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amount
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 of money without
reasonabilty
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reasonable
reasonability
, it will result in resentment and lack of trust in
government
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.
Moreover
,
this
 can
also
 widen the gap between the rich and the poor. If
the
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wealthy families sending their children to private
schools
 get a tax reduction, they will pay less than parents with low financial ability.
As a result
, poor
people
 still have burdens of school fees that the wealthy do not have.
In addition
, because of the contribution to
education
 through
taxes
 of individuals, all members of
the
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society can be beneficial. The more
people
 pay the money
supporting
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 public
schools
 , the higher
quality
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education
 system there is.
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 with the well-funded
education
 system, it is claimed that there will be more equal opportunities for the young to get access to decent universities and seek a good
job
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jobs
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.
As a result
, there will be a more well-educated workforce and
well qualified
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, competent staff, which is a huge advantage for companies which belongs to the wealthy classes.
Due to
this
, the nation can be more productive and prosperous. It is so obvious that there are a
quantity
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 of benefits
from
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 not decreasing
taxes
in
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education
 In conclusion, I completely oppose the idea that parents of children in private
schools
 should not be required to contribute to public
schools
 through levies because it will cause a number of problems.
Submitted by Minh Hà on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tax exemption
  • public education
  • private schools
  • collective responsibility
  • societal welfare
  • equitable access
  • financial burden
  • social cohesion
  • tax credits
  • vouchers
  • subsidies
  • state-funded
  • socioeconomic disparities
  • public vs. private sector
  • quality of education
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