The first graph gives the number of passengers travelling by train in Sydney. The second graph provides information on the percentage of trains running on time.
The two line graphs represent the
number
of people who use the train in Sydney and the proportion of trains that move within time respectively from 1995 to 2004.
Use synonyms
Overall
, It can clearly be seen that the Linking Words
number
of train passengers increased over the period Use synonyms
while
the percentage of trains that work within time saw a decrease.
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To begin
with, the Linking Words
number
of people who boarded the train in 1995 stood at 250 Use synonyms
million
. Use synonyms
This
increased gradually to about 265 Linking Words
million
in the next 4 years until it peaked at 300 Use synonyms
million
in 2001. The Use synonyms
number
declined the following year to 280 Use synonyms
million
. It Use synonyms
then
plateaued at 280 Linking Words
million
for the remaining years.
The percentage of trains that worked on time Use synonyms
on the other hand
stood at about 93% in 1995 but dropped slightly to 85% in 1997. In the next 6 years, the figures fluctuated until Linking Words
it
saw a dramatic plunge to about 72% in 2004.Correct pronoun usage
they
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