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These days many children spen a lot time playing video games and many parents feel this is very negative. Do you agree or disagree?

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In modern times an increasing number of
children
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 are exposed to technology, not only for completing their schoolwork
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 but for playing digital
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 either offline or online.
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 has become a point of concern for many parents. With alarming risks involved in kids engaging in
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games
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 and the amount of
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 spent on computer
games
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, it is with merit that guardians are concerned. There is no denying that young
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 and young adults who occupy all their free
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 playing
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 on consoles is at risk of becoming socially inept. Spending
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 with family, and having social interactions with friends, play an important role in a young person’s social development. With the amount of
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 these youngsters are spending on their gaming devices, they have almost no
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 for family or friends, and ,
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 lose the opportunity to learn essential family values.
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 may acquire inappropriate social norms. Very often
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 are violent and portray less-desirable role models as heroes, and impressionable minds can easily adopt
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 as regular behaviour in the real world.
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 these are some pertinent reasons for concern, we will continue to address other detrimental aspects of the impact of gaming on
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. It is no secret that the gaming industry caters to those who will purchase their products religiously, and some popular
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 have an almost cult-like following. Teenagers will do anything to keep up with the latest updates or patches to their favourite
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, these enhancements can be costly to parents. The insistence on these additions to already purchased
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 often causes conflict between caregivers and their offspring.
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 of the deteriorating relationship, there is a growing need for adolescents to engage with other gamers, and very often these are older players on forums or online platforms for a specific game. Younger gamers,
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, may open themselves up to exposure
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 groomers and predators.
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 these alarming hazards, it is without a doubt that guardians of young ones have sound reason to be worried! As we can see, exposure to
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 type of entertainment can lead to debilitating social development,
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 the vulnerability of little people playing hazardous
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. When it comes to gaming and
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, there are significant dangers and
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 parents have every right to be anxious about their loved ones.

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