You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain the situation Say what action you would like the company to take

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing regarding the

replacement

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of a faulty Nickon 350s digital camera which I purchased from your store on May 05, 2023. My name is Jennifer Ramos, living on Park Avenue Street. I am a regular customer of your shop for the

last

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ten years, and I had never experienced any issue with your service except

last

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time.

While

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unboxing the product, I noticed that the camera was damaged. I contacted your customer care service and returned it immediately for a

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. Your company representative informed me that

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the shortage of the specific model in your showroom, the

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will be received within 24 hours.

However

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, I do not receive the

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after one week of the purchase. I brought the camera to gift to my son for his birthday and his birthday is on next Sunday. I am requesting you to provide the

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by tomorrow. If not, please refund the full amount of the product. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Jennifer Ramos

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

175 words

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