You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: Introduce yourself Explain the situation Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing regarding the
replacement
of a faulty Nickon 350s digital camera which I purchased from your store on May 05, 2023.
My name is Jennifer Ramos, living on Park Avenue Street. I am a regular customer of your shop for the last
ten years, and I had never experienced any issue with your service except last
time. While
unboxing the product, I noticed that the camera was damaged. I contacted your customer care service and returned it immediately for a replacement
. Your company representative informed me that due to
the shortage of the specific model in your showroom, the replacement
will be received within 24 hours. However
, I do not receive the replacement
after one week of the purchase.
I brought the camera to gift to my son for his birthday and his birthday is on next Sunday. I am requesting you to provide the replacement
by tomorrow. If not, please refund the full amount of the product.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Jennifer RamosSubmitted by ck.manshad on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite