The difference between countries is becoming less and less evident as people all over the world wear the same fashions, watch the same TV channels, use the same brands, and have similar eating habits. Do you think that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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The given illustration explains the method of making briThe given illustration explains the method of making
bricks
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followed by
construction
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the construction
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industry. It can be seen that the process begins with the digger used for excavating clay from the ground which is
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placed on the metal grid over a roller in the next step. The clay is
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mixed with sand and water which can either be pressed and cut into
bricks
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with the help of
wire
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cutter or inserted in the
mold
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to form
bricks
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.
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the
bricks
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are placed in a drying oven for almost 28-48 hours followed by stacking
bricks
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in the
klin
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kiln
at
moderate
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temperature between 200 to
980 degree
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celsius
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.
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the stack is placed at
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a hight
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hight
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high
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temperature ranging from 870 to 1300
degree
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celcius
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celsius
.
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, the
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are
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placed in a cooling chamber for 48-72 hours and
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they are ready for packaging and delivery.
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, the whole method of manufacturing
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involves seven distinct steps.
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