The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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information about the number of Ashdown

Museum

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guests in the

year

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before and the

year

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after it was renovated and the results of surveys from

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respondents

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to measure their

satisfied

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when visiting the

museum

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.

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, the renovated

museum

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was 20% more satisfied than before being refurbished which attracted 18,000 more visitors. First of all, the number of

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to Ashdown

Museum

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showed 74,000 people in the

year

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before upgrading the design

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after the restoration was finished it derived considerably higher visitors which obtained 92,000 people.

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, before

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museum

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being

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modernization

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, the pie chart showed 40%

guest

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was dissatisfied and satisfied in the

year

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after took place of dissatisfied which was the largest percentage and

dissatisfied

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lessened to 15%.

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, very dissatisfied declined to 5%. Notwithstanding very satisfied rose

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20% to 35%, there was still the same amount of no response to the survey at 5%.