Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree

Technology
is improving globally.
Technology
will help
students
in learning and understanding in a faster
ways
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we can ever think of.
Technology
also
helps
students
to have access to different
knowledge
. The use of
internet
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the internet
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has served as a means of sensitisation and
also
a means of improving learning in the world.
Technology
have
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a greater influence on children by helping them to be attentive and easily understand what they are being taught. It is believed that children learn faster from what they see and from what they hear than being taught abstractly,
this
is actually true as
this
has helped a lot of
students
to have an
excellence
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result.
For instance
, chemistry is understood better when they are being explained with videos and
audios
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audio
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as well as
practicals which has made a lot of
students
to
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love the subject more.
Furthermore
,
students
do excellently well when taught with audio and video clips. The use of
technology
helps
students
to have access to different
school
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schools
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of thoughts globally which helps to widen their
knowledge
.
This
has been supported by a lot of scholars globally.
For example
, in
Nursing
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the definition of nursing by different
theorist
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theorists
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has helped
students
to apply
knowledge
in the practical care of patients.
Therefore
,
this
has globally
being
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been
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in use by both
students
and
the
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apply
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teachers
as well as
improving their
knowledge
on
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diverse ways of treatment. In conclusion, teachers
replaced
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by
technology
is a positive way of revolution in
educational
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system.
Therefore
,
this
has helped
to
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not only improve understanding but
also
widen the
knowledge
of the
students
globally.
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  • progressively
  • substituted
  • prevalent
  • crucial
  • enhance
  • support
  • guidance
  • interaction
  • personal touch
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