Some people think that childcare centers provide the best services for children of preschool age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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be taken care of by childcare

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or family members become a hot topic nowadays.

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I believe professional educational institutions could derive various positive influences on underages, others are in favour of their descendants spending more time with their grandparents.

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with, letting family members take care of the next generation not only

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young individuals to inherit courtesy manners from elder people but more importantly, to ensure the safety of their

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the ignorance of workers.

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, the average ratio between

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and

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in childcare

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in Taiwan is one to five,

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, they are not able to keep an eye on every kid at all

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. A growing number of unfortunate news regarding

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getting hurt raise concerns among parents, many of them turning to their family members for help

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, in my perspective, educational institutions with sufficient teaching resources and professional educators could provide better care to

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, compared to people in families. First of all, young individuals are able to gain up-to-date acknowledges in cram schools, with systematic education, which helps students to fit into group life in the future.

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, they are able to meet new friends with different backgrounds which is a good practice to cultivate their capacity of communication. Take Japan as an example, the majority of

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are sent to childcare

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, where they will learn to tackle various daily tasks, including getting dressed, eating with proper kitchenware and folding bed sheets. To summarise, it is inevitable that

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staying home with elderly people could have more attention from adults and be able to deter many hazards compared to on campuses.

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, I agree that there are more advantages provoked

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sending young individuals to daycare

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the acquisition of basic life skills and being socialized at an early age.