The health benefits of physical activities are well known. Despite this, many people do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to encourage them exercise regularly?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Physical inactivity
  • Exercise regime
  • Motivation
  • Fitness
  • Wellness programs
  • Public awareness
  • Facilities
  • Incentives
  • Health benefits
  • Sedentary entertainment
  • Accessibility
  • Community-based activities
  • Work-life balance
  • Barrier to exercise
  • Social influence
  • Public facilities
  • Engagement
  • Financial constraints
  • Technology in fitness
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