You have been working for a company for some time, and other rival companies are willing to employ you with a higher salary for all the practical experience you have gained. Write a letter to your company manager and in your letter • Explain the situation • Say what you would like the manager to do (increase the salary etc.) • Say what action you would take in case the manager fails to meet your demands Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr Potts,
I am writing to explain that I am in a very difficult situation.
As you know, I have been working for your company for a long time. Other rival companies are willing to employ me with a higher salary for all the practical experience. I have gained I really need money right now.
Therefore
, I would like you to raise my salary. If you do not increase my wages, I will be forced to leave my job. I will be forced to agree other
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. If you increase my payment, God willing, I will try to do better than before. I think you understand my Fix the agreement mistake
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. I am sure you are not upset.
I hope you will consider all my Add a comma
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. Thank you for your attention.
Yours sincerely,
Marjona Yóldoshaliyeva.Fix the agreement mistake
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite