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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism of their teachers. Others think it will lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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In the age of
modern
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 century, education became a heated topic. Some
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individuals
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 hold the belief that we should provide an incentive for
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students
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 to give
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remarks
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 or condemn their
teachers
while
 others disapprove of these actions.
This
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 and give my personal opinion On the one hand,
students
 have
capability
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 to give their feedback and express
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 opinion freely , including their thought about
teachers
 . It is beneficial to both
teachers
 and
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.
For instance
,
teachers
 who give numerous homework and
students
 have to bury themselves in
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 and do not have enough time to engage in outdoor activities .
Hence
, every student should text a message or talk directly with their trainer to talk about what issues they endured with fulfilling the assignment .
Additionally
, the relationship between
teachers
 and
students
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 not close. Learners are capable of contributing solutions which assist
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teachers
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 in having a good term with every student in the class
such
 as
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 extracurricular
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.
As a result
,
teachers
 will recognize their own
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weaknesses
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 and find the way to make
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On the other hand
, these student’s
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actions
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 and
behavior
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 may make
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the teacher
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teacher
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teachers
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 feel a great sense of disappointment and dejection
due to
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 to tackle
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intricate
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 lesson
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 in order to guide
students
 with the most straightforward instruction.
Nevertheless
, some amateur learners
incline
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 to censure for
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teachers’
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 inexperience .
In addition
, a majority of high school
students
 make a habit
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 and underestimating pedagogical skills which contribute nothing to
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 the quality of the education In conclusion,
students
 may be not
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 to appreciate.
However
, I strongly believe that when
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humans
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 motivate
students
 to comment on
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 teaching method
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 will aid them in innovating the level of academic performance and making
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 system get better
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