The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart depicts the percentage of Australian people’s habit in
tea
and coffee
buying and drinking in five cities.
Overall
, most of citizens
from five cities consume Add an article
the citizens
coffee
or tea
from café with the
percentage Correct article usage
a
is
above 50% in every city whilst Hobart Unnecessary verb
apply
have
the highest percentage at 65%. Except for Adelaide, the highest consumption is instant Correct subject-verb agreement
has
coffee
. While
,
the lowest type of Remove the comma
apply
coffee
and tea
consumed by citizens from five cities is fresh coffee
which is under 45% for each city.
In Hobart, melbourne
and Sidney, the popular habit is going to Change the capitalization
Melbourne
coffee
for buying a cup of coffee
or tea
. While
in Brisbane, the habit of going to coffee
shop
and buying instant Fix the agreement mistake
shops
coffee
is quite populer
with the difference Correct your spelling
popular
is
only 1-2 Wrong verb form
being
percents
. Fix the agreement mistake
percent
In contrast
, a
half of Adelaide’s people tend to buy instant Remove the article
apply
coffee
remaining less than 40% who bought fresh coffee
or went to café.Submitted by rams212 on
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