The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given chart depicts the percentage of Australian people’s habit in

tea

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and

coffee

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buying and drinking in five cities.

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, most of

citizens

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the citizens

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from five cities consume

coffee

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or

tea

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from café with

the

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a

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percentage

is

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apply

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above 50% in every city whilst Hobart

have

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the highest percentage at 65%. Except for Adelaide, the highest consumption is instant

coffee

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.

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,

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the lowest type of

coffee

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and

tea

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consumed by citizens from five cities is fresh

coffee

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which is under 45% for each city. In Hobart,

melbourne

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Melbourne

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and Sidney, the popular habit is going to

coffee

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for buying a cup of

coffee

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or

tea

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.

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in Brisbane, the habit of going to

coffee

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shop

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shops

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and buying instant

coffee

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is quite

populer

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popular

with the difference

is

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being

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only 1-2

percents

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percent

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.

In contrast

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,

a

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apply

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half of Adelaide’s people tend to buy instant

coffee

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remaining less than 40% who bought fresh

coffee

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or went to café.