Chart A below shows the rate of oil consumption (in millions of barrel)in a small country from 1950 to 2010.Chart B shows the number of people employed in the oil industry in that country,and also the rate of unemployment throughout the country over the same time.

The line chart illustrates the amount of grease consumed in a country.

On the other hand

,the table chart describes the proportion of citizens working in an oil organization, and

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the rate of unemployed individuals in the same country between 1950 and 2010. The units of measurement are millions of barrels and

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respectively.

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,it is evident that oil consumption increased dramatically over the period,

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production reflects on the provision of jobs for people, which shows fluctuation in the beginning before eventually dropping to half of the given figure.

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oil consumed in the nation,

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stood at around 20 million barrels per year until 1970 when it rose steadily to reach 40 million barrels in 2000 and around 50 million by 2010.Looking at the data in the industry segment, we can see the growth in consumption matched by a similar threefold trend in the employment sector.Figures fluctuated around 1000 people until 1970 before rising consistently to 1800 in 1980 and reaching 3100 in 2010.

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,turning our attention to nationwide unemployment,it is obvious that the figure declined from 4 per cent to 3.1 per cent over the first 3 years (1950 to 1980) before progressively declining to stand at 1.6 per cent by the

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year in question.