The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.

The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.
The graph lays out the number of Chinese owning transportation from 1987 to 1999.
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writing will highlight some main features and make comparisons where relevant. The numbers will be represented in thousands (000). In overview, there is a significant growth in vehicle ownership in the country and the numbers shown are indicating that there is immense buying from the people there within a decade. Starting from the earliest year, the total purchases
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that it was just less than 500 people who got to drive.
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between 1987 to 1991, it gradually increased and doubled its initial starting year amount. It had
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jumped twice its original calculations.from below 400 to 2,000 within the range of 4 years.
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, it continued to double up by 1,000 units per year and
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reached a peak at

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