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There are severe social consequences to housing shortages and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Introduction
Nowadays, it has different problems
to
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with
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 housing
shortages
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 and
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this events
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this event
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 solve the
government
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 l agree with
this
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 idea
government
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 is confident
to
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of
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 housing
shortages
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 but maybe
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people
peope
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people
 spent many time
government
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 to it
Body · 1
The
confident
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 is
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
 to
shortages
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 for us
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 governments solve any problems
to
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 housing. It has many
possible
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 to building your
documents
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 and if they say new low to housing
shortages
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 so
this
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 is so good for us.It is difficult to live without
home
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a home
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 in the world.
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Peope
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People
need
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 help
to
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from
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government
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the government
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. Maybe
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peope's
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people
people's
 change their life if
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government
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the government
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 make
decision
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a decision
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 new low to housing
shortages
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 . I expect new
lowes
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changing
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 their life
Body · 2
In
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On
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other hand
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another hand
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, it takes many times because asking all of
family
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the family
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 members
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documents
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 and
wast
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waste
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documents
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 we gave
documents
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for
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to
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government
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the government
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to
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for
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 housing
shortages
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 they say family
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members
mambers
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members
, job, and other
wast
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waste
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 questions l hope
Body · 3
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This
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 problems solve in the
futures
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future
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. Only try
to
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apply
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your life so you achieve your goals.
Conclusion
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,
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government
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the government
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 can help
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people
peope
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to
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with
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 housing
shortages
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 without questioners. l have
tryed
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tried
 to
anwer
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answer
 correctly and
provid
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provide
 relevant answers
examples
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 to the question.

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