There are severe social consequences to housing shortages and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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solve the
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housing
shortages
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is
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goverment
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governments solve any problems
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housing. It has many
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to building your
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and if they say new low to housing
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so
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in the world.
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help
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government
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. Maybe
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make
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new low to housing
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. I expect new
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their life
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, it takes many times because asking all of
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members
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government
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to
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they say family
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, job, and other
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problems solve in the
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. Only try
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your life so you achieve your goals.
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,
government
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can help
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people
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housing
shortages
without questioners. l have
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