The two maps below raod access to a city hospital in2007 and in 2010.

The two maps illustrate the information about the
road
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connectivity to a
city
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hospital in the year
of
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2007 and 2010.
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, it can be seen that in 2007,
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city
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the city
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hospital was connected
with
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by
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two main roads
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such
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apply
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as ring
road
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and
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city
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a city
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Road
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and It has
sparate
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separate
carparking
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car parking
for
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Staff
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the Staff
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and
public
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the public
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.
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, in 2010. there was a
significan
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significant
improvement in roads and other facilities
suchas
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such as
there was
sparate
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separate
car parking for
public
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the public
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and
Staff
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and replaced with new circular roads.
According to
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the maps, the ring
road
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in
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on
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the
nourth
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north
Side and the
city
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road
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in
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on
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Soulth
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South
Side remained
same
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the same
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For both years, but there was
a
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an
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improvement in
carparking
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car parking
, in 2007, the Space for car parking allocated for both
staff
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and
public
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the public
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as compared with 2010, the Space was individually allocated for both public parking and for
Staff
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parking. In 2007, there was only one crossing
road
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and connected with only
hospital
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the hospital
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Road
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.
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in 2010
city
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roaf connected with
bus
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a bus
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station hospital
road
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and public car parking.
Bus
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The bus
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station was
buil
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built
differently
in
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on
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the west Side of the
coty
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city
hospital
where
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whereas
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in 2007 it was behind the
hosptical
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hospital
road
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.

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