The chart below gives information about how families on one country spent their weekly income 1968 and in 2018

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data about spending weekly money in a certain country in 1968 and 2018.

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8 various usages of families in 2 particular years.

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figure was 35 percentages in

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1968. Personal goods

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lowest

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number in 2018 and 1968, people spent only about 5 %. For households families had

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income

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10 % in both years.

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, housing, clothing and footwear had 10 %.

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families allocated between and transport

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used of money 10 % in 1968. For

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year the percentage of leisure expenses surged sharply nearly 10 %.

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40 years later. Most of all money was spent

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leisure (just over 20% ) and housing (just under 20%)

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only about 5% were used for fuel and power. Clothing and footwear outrace personal goods a little bit. People bought household goods around 10%.

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their weekly income for transport around 15%