The chart below gives information about how families on one country spent their weekly income 1968 and in 2018
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data about spending weekly money in a certain country in 1968 and 2018.
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8 various usages of families in 2 particular years. Change the verb form
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1968. Personal goods Remove the redundancy
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was
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lowest
number in 2018 and 1968, people spent only about 5 %. For households families had Change the article
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a weekly
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10 % in both years.
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, housing, clothing and footwear had 10 %. Linking Words
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families allocated between and transport Add a comma
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used of money 10 % in 1968. For Linking Words
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year the percentage of leisure expenses surged sharply nearly 10 %.
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40 years later. Most of all money was spent Change preposition
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for
leisure (just over 20% ) and housing (just under 20%) Change preposition
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only about 5% were used for fuel and power. Clothing and footwear outrace personal goods a little bit. People bought household goods around 10%. Linking Words
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, all individuals use Linking Words
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their weekly income for transport around 15%Change preposition
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