You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear ash, I hope you and your family are doing well. I got your letter Saturday, I was occupied for the whole week so I could not write to you immediately. I am really happy that you contacted me for

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decision.

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in school, we spent lots of time together but after finishing high school we barely called each other. I remember in December you told me that college is not for you but because of family pressure you gave it another try. But I think if being in college is not helping you in any way, you should take a drop off a month from college. After a month, if you felt like continuing only

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you should pursue the degree

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don't waste your time. Meanwhile, I advise you to search for a

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because sitting free might make you idle. Your grades in mathematics were terrific in school and that would be really helpful in finding you a well-paid

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. Getting a

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will benefit your family too, as a little financial aid will reduce your father's burden.

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, finding work is not easy nowadays, so I suggest you find good references. You can apply online in banks or tutoring is a good option for you. I remember how you used to teach me at the

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moment of our exams. I wish you luck on your

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search and write me back once you get one. Regards Ma

me1090905Wed May 10 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

243 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Real-world experience
Practical experience
Financial independence
On-the-job training
Student loan debt
Personal growth
Professional networking
Career development
Skilled workers
Job market
Career goals
Immediate income
Professional relationships
Market demand
Defining interests
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