You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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Dear
Mrs.
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Smith I am writing in order to communicate to you my dissatisfaction with the accommodation you rent to me and my family. We move to
this
country a few months ago, and you were so nice
with
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us. As you know, we are a smaller family and do not need a big place to live. I really like the location of it but there are some
inconvenients
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inconveniences
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with the furniture. First of all, when rains the water through the ceilings and wet the living table.
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, the bed is too uncomfortable, it does not have a good mattress and neither a pillow. And in the bathroom, there is some mould. I am asking if you can come
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here and resolve these problems or I can do it but if you refund the money I will spend. In case you can not, I will have to find another place to go. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Kind regards, Camila
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