You work for a children’s home which needs volunteers to help at weekends. Write to the the local newspaper requesting that they publicise the vacancies. You should include details of what is required of the applicants and explain the ways in which both volunteers and children migt benefit
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Dear manager
I am writing
this
letter to request you about publishing
our subject in many areas of the first paper of the newspaper which the subject is Change preposition
to publish
volunteers
to help at the weekends in the children
's home
. Because in the next few weeks, we have many special events around our community.
Firstly
. for the Canada Day action. we have to decorate our home
, so the volunteers
should know about the special features of that day to teach children
and help them. ,Also
they should paint something on the wall. Already i
considered that should be a hard job, but after finishing you will be proud of yourself.
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I
secondly
, we are chosen by the local mayor to perform a ceremony related to the growth of children
in the downtown. According to
this
issue, all the volunteers
should take care of all of the children
during the event. Also
, at the end
of the ceremony, our children
's home
manager will choose one of the best volunteers
and he has an attractive gift for volunteers
.
in the end, we should organize a game party for children
with their parents. The number of participants is too much and this
event is located in a backyard home
, so the volunteers
must put temporary walls around the game party. Moreover
, during the game party children
play with their parents and volunteers
will play the role of arbitrator.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully
Steve WestSubmitted by javadsaady1992 on
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task response
Ensure clear and concise task response addressing the requirements for volunteers and children's benefits.
coherence cohesion
Improve coherence and cohesion by organizing the content into distinct paragraphs and using appropriate transition words.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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