Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Several

people

belief

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that strict

punishment

for driving offences

are

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the solution to decreasing

traffic

accident

.

On the other hand

, others argue that other

measures

would be more efficient in increasing

road

safety. Both arguments

has

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potential and threat. To my way of thinking. other

measures

is

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more creative than strict

punishment

. So, it has more

benefit

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for all parties, either for the law enforcer or for the

driver

. In

current

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era,

humanity

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approach

is more popular than

repressive

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the repressive

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approach

. To make

people

obey the rules, it

is need

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other

measures

,

besides

strict

punishment

, that

more

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are more

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humanist.

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of the examples of the

measures

is giving

reward

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for

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whom obey the limitation of speed.

People

will

competing

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be competing

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to drive under the speed

limitation

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to get the reward.

This

condition can

decreasing

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be decreasing

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the possibility of

traffic

accident

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accidents

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.

Besides

, the other

measures

is

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are

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the policy of government like building facilities on the

road

. Specifically, street lighting is very important to make sure the safety of the

road

. Nowadays,

repressive

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a repressive

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approach

has been started to leave by modern society.

One

of the examples from

repressive

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the repressive

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approach

is strict

punishment

.

People

belief

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believe

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that strict

punishment

cannot make

people

afraid to

committing

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the

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offence, especially for driving

offence

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offences

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. Even though the

driver

get

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the

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a

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strict

punishment

, it

is not guarantee

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does not guarantee

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the

driver

not

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does not

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repeat the offence.

Moreover

, if the offender has

lot

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a lot

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of money. So, it

is need

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needs

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other

measures

to make the

driver

obey the rules on the

road

. There are two

way

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of thinking to

decreasing

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traffic

accident

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accidents

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. The first

one

is strict

punishment

and the second

one

is other

measures

. Both of them has

a

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purpose

to

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of

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decreasing

traffic

accident

. Actually,

in

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the

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apply

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present, strict

punishment

cannot guarantee the offender do the same mistake.

On the other hand

, other

measures

that

more

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are more

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creative can make

people

competing

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compete

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to always obey the

traffic

rules. In my opinion, other

measures

is

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are

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more effective

to

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in

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reducing

traffic

the

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apply

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accident

than strict

punishment

.