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while
some perspectives consider it as the obligation of educational institutions to even the number, I
disagree with
such
opinions since I am in favour of demolishing
gender
discrimination as a
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solution.
To begin
with, since youth
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different
gender
are encouraged to focus on
academic studies, which foster disadvantages
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young people. Regarding the cases as
such
, educators should
more opportunities for them to pursue their passion.
For example
, governments in Taiwan provide
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gender
courses to foster women with the capacity of programming without worry about
gender
discrimination.
However
,
such
policies exclude females from the real world,
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in real industries.
On the other hand
, there are other methods which derive more merits in the long-term span. First of all, young individuals should be able to access to
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at
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early age to find their
.
Secondly
,
instead
of
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on
gender
which provokes
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impact, it is better to take out the examination elements that could affected by
gender
prejudices, including
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test, and exclude photos on resumes. Take the USA as an example, most
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authorities are not allowed to request photos of employees and their
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, since it could reveal their
gender
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, to prevent people judge a book by its cover. It not only
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the diversity in commercial institutions but foster the younger generation
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freely.
To summarise, it is inevitable that universities are able to even the number
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different
gender
in curriculums.
However
, there are
drawbacks caused by
such
policies,
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low competition among female
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in certain subjects.
Therefore
, I could only partially agree with
such
ideals since there are other ways to solve problems.