University should enrol equal numbers of male and female students in all subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

The ratio between male and female students in certain subjects
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,
while
some perspectives consider it as the obligation of educational institutions to even the number, I
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personally
disagree with
such
opinions since I am in favour of demolishing
gender
discrimination as a
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solution.
To begin
with, since youth
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different
gender
are encouraged to focus on
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accordingly
academic studies, which foster disadvantages
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young people. Regarding the cases as
such
, educators should
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offer
more opportunities for them to pursue their passion.
For example
, governments in Taiwan provide
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gender
courses to foster women with the capacity of programming without worry about
gender
discrimination.
However
,
such
policies exclude females from the real world,
due to
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lack of
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experience
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in real industries.
On the other hand
, there are other methods which derive more merits in the long-term span. First of all, young individuals should be able to access to
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range of
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at
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early age to find their
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interests
interested
.
Secondly
,
instead
of
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focusing
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on
gender
which provokes
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impact, it is better to take out the examination elements that could affected by
gender
prejudices, including
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anonymous
test, and exclude photos on resumes. Take the USA as an example, most
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authorities are not allowed to request photos of employees and their
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names
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, since it could reveal their
gender
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, to prevent people judge a book by its cover. It not only
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the diversity in commercial institutions but foster the younger generation
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their
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freely. To summarise, it is inevitable that universities are able to even the number
in
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different
gender
in curriculums.
However
, there are
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various
drawbacks caused by
such
policies,
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including
a
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low competition among female
student
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students
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in certain subjects.
Therefore
, I could only partially agree with 
such
ideals since there are other ways to solve problems.
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