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The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.

The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June.
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The bar
chart
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 above illustrates the information about
requests
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 at a tourist office in one specifically European country, namely in the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, in the period of time from January to June respectively. It is worth mentioning that the most substantial number of
requests
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 had been made in person and in June it accounts for approximately 1900 efforts. Notwithstanding, the given
chart
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 made up the worst figure at the beginning of the examination, namely in January, when it accounted for, give or take, 400 attempts. To delve into the other figures, it is crucial to emphasise that
requests
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 by both letter and email make up the decline in the period of time from March to May.
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, even though the
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 showed progressive results at the beginning, namely in January, now
it is clear that
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 the
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 demonstrates the smallest number of
requests
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.
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, it illustrates a plateau from May to June.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, requests with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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