The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of five different kinds of
energy
production
( coal,
gas
,
petro
Correct your spelling
petrol
, nuclear and other ) generated in France in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
, coal and
gas
accounted for the majority of
energy
production
in both years. Most of the
energy
production
experienced an increase from 1995 to 2005,
while
the
production
of
petro
Correct your spelling
petrol
declined. To be specific, in 1995 coal
gas
and
petro
consisted of similar and
also
the largest proportion with 29.8%, 29.63%, and 29.27% respectively. The remaining figures (nuclear and other) only accounted for roughly 11% in 1995. After 10 years, The highest percentage of
energy
generation was still coal,
gas
, and
petro
Correct your spelling
petrol
. Coal and
gas
slightly grow to approximately 1%,
however
,
petro
Change the capitalization
Petro
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witnessed and notable decrease of about 10%. In terms of the remaining
energy
production
, nuclear rose around 3% and the other
production
showed significant growth from 4.9% in 1995 to 9.10% in 2005.
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