The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.

The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.
The vertical bar graph illustrates the number of Chinese vehicle owners from 1987 to 1999.
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, the
figure
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grew steadily without any pitfalls throughout the dozen
of
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years
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. At the initial point, about 250,000
of
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Chinese owned their vehicle, whose number was the minimum within the
degignated
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designated
period. After their
figure
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roughly doubled in the next two
years
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, it
mirginally
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marginally
originally
went up between 1991 and 1993 to reach
apploximately
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approximately
a
million
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. In the following phase, Chinese people started their significant growth in their vehicle ownership number by a
million
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each
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two
years
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from 1995, when the
figure
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stood at 2
million
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. Once it
resistered
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resisted
at 3
million
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in 1997, it surged to surpass the border of 4
million
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, which meant that the
figure
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increased by over fifteen-folds in the
last
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12
years
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of
20th
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the 20th
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century.

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