The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagrams illustrated the modifications of the paths to enter the
city
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hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that it had a lot of changes not only was moved but
also
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built in 2007, it did not have a roundabout yet but in 2010, two traffic circles were added on Hospital Street. In 2007, the
city
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hospital was surrounded by Ring Road and was linked by Hospital Rd both sides of it were bus stop which in 2010, the right side was replaced by the staff car park and the all of bus stations was moved to the left side which was larger than before. And had two roads connected with the indirect located on the jungle between Rind Road and Hospital Avenue and the intersection between
City
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Road and Hospital Rd.
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, three years later, In 2010, the Public car park was separated from the staff car park and was transferred from in front of the
city
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hospital to the right hand of it.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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