The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts and table given illustrate the data of the police budget and where the
money
obtained
Add a missing verb
was obtained
from
in the year Change preposition
apply
of
2017 in comparison to 2018 in an area of Britain. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, there was an increase on
all categories of fund sources Change preposition
in
while
the money
spent on salaries was always greatest
.
First of all, in 2017 the highest amount of sources came from Correct article usage
the greatest
national
government which was 175,5m and it still became the majority in 2018. Correct article usage
the national
Thus
was followed by local taxes and other sources Correct your spelling
This
exemplify
Wrong verb form
exemplifying
a grants
at 102,3m and 38,5m in 2018 respectively. Correct the article-noun agreement
grants
a grant
In addition
, the total amount of budget in 2018 was higher than 2017
Change preposition
in 2017
that
had an additional Correct pronoun usage
apply
of
13,9m.
Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, the police spent less money
on technology but there was 6
% Correct article usage
a 6
increasing
in 2018 that almost surpassed buildings and transport. Replace the word
increase
Meanwhile
salaries showed Add a comma
,Meanwhile
lessening
Correct article usage
a lessening
for
6% Change preposition
of
on
Change preposition
in
money
spending. In contrast
, buildings and transport remained the same at 17%.Submitted by farel2300 on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, m with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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