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The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The figures illustrate the map of Islip
town
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, which the first
one
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 shows now, and the second
one
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it
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apply
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is a map of the development of the
future
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town
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.
Overall
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, now in the
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city
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,city
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 there is just a main
road
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 and a lot of
shops
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 with a big
park
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 and
a
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the
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 countryside. For
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future
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the future
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plan
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plans
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, the number of roads will increase, some
shops
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 will be destroyed and new houses will be built. Now, in the centre of the
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town
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,town
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 we just have
one
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 main
road
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 with
two
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dead end
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dead-end
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 streets.
However
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, in the
future
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 the main
road
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 which is connected east to west of the
city
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 will change as a pedestrian, and
dual
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a dual
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 carriageway will be built,
one
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 of them will connect the
two
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dead end
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dead-end
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 streets to each other, another carriageway, the countryside will demolish and build the other
road
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.
Therefore
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, in the
future
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city
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,city
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 we will have
dual
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a dual
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 carriageway plus
one
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 pedestrian. For the buildings in the
town
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, we have
two
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 line
shops
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, which are located in the north and south of the main
road
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, the
shops
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 which are in the north of
main
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the main
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road
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 will be destroyed and
bus
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the bus
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 station, shopping centre, car
park
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 and new houses will be built. For connecting
two
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dead end
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dead-end
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 streets in the south of the
city
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, the size of the
park
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 will decrease and some houses will be built
Linking Words
besides
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beside
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 the school and
park
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, one, future, city, road, shops, park, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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