The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The figures illustrate the map of Islip
town
, which the first
one
shows now, and the second
one
it
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apply
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is a map of the development of the
future
town
.
Overall
, now in the
city
Add a comma
,city
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there is just a main
road
and a lot of
shops
with a big
park
and
a
Correct article usage
the
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countryside. For
future
Correct article usage
the future
show examples
plan
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plans
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, the number of roads will increase, some
shops
will be destroyed and new houses will be built. Now, in the centre of the
town
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,town
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we just have
one
main
road
with
two
dead end
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dead-end
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streets.
However
, in the
future
the main
road
which is connected east to west of the
city
will change as a pedestrian, and
dual
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a dual
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carriageway will be built,
one
of them will connect the
two
dead end
Add a hyphen
dead-end
show examples
streets to each other, another carriageway, the countryside will demolish and build the other
road
.
Therefore
, in the
future
city
Add a comma
,city
show examples
we will have
dual
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a dual
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carriageway plus
one
pedestrian. For the buildings in the
town
, we have
two
line
shops
, which are located in the north and south of the main
road
, the
shops
which are in the north of
main
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the main
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road
will be destroyed and
bus
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the bus
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station, shopping centre, car
park
and new houses will be built. For connecting
two
dead end
Add a hyphen
dead-end
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streets in the south of the
city
, the size of the
park
will decrease and some houses will be built
besides
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beside
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the school and
park
.
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