The diagram below shows how honey is made in small-scale commercial production. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture outlines the process of how
honey
is made.
Overall
, there are 11 stages, with human intervention and without it . The initial process begins with gathering nectar and culminates with delivering to sell.
The scale begins with the Bee phase, bees collect nectar and then
they deposit it to their inhabitants. The subsequent stage is drying honey
and keeping cells clean.
The second main stage is the human phase. They select honey
comps and deliver them to pressing combs and separating honey
itself. The next step is
pouring honey
into the sump tank, in that machine honey
is heated up to 50c and after that homey settles in the tank for about 2-4 days. The final stages consist of pouring honey
into jars and delivering it to the market.Submitted by bexzodraxmatillayev2 on
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