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The charts below show the proposition of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts below show the proposition of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
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The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of British
students
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 who know to speak other languages apart from English at a university in England in the years 2000
as well as
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 2010.
Overall
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, Spanish was the most spoken language in both periods,
while
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 German was the lowest one in both years. The number of
students
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 who can speak Spanish was 30% in the year 2000 and increased by 5% in 2010. The proportion of
students
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 who were able to speak only English decreased to 10% in 2010 from 20% in 2000.
Although
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 the percentage of
students
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 who were aware of French was 15% in 2000, it went down to 10% in 2010. Speaking in two languages was 10% among
students
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 in 2000 and
this
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 percentage stayed unchanged in 2010. The number of
students
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 who spoke German was the same in both years
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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