Technology is becoming progressively universal.in the fullness of time, Classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology.Do you agree or disagree?

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technology
has increased rapidly and later in the future, educational sectors will be replaced by
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of
technology
.I disagree that Educators will be  substituted for
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because
Students
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non-challant
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attitude towards
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classwork
class works
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rate .
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conclusion.
To begin
with,
technology
has developed to the extent of causing more harm than good in
this
present world. There are various ways in which School
lectures
can be substituted for
computer
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,it includes Virtual classes and coding.In lieu of
this
,Some
students
will have bad
behavior
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towards learning because of lack of proper monitoring since most of their
lectures
are often virtual,educators won'
t
be available to scold
students
properly
while
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virtual classes which
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being brought about by
technology
.
For instance
, A student taking
lectures
,eating and gisting at the same time
while
lecture
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the lecture
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is going on. The lecturer won'
t
see
such
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a candidate
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physically and the student doesn'
t
bother about the teachings too Moreso, Some learners usually end up having bad results after writing
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,
this
is because most of them always focus on
technology
rather than coming in contact with their lecturers.
Also
, most
students
does
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not have time to read and prepare for
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the exam
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due to
unavailability
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of
hard copy
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reading materials,some of the
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won'
t
have a tangible book to read.
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, A student who doesn'
t
have time to go through slides sent after online
lectures
and reading
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wrote an examination and failed woefully. In conclusion, Educational settings will not be replaced with
technology
due to
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of disciplinary actions which exist among learners.Moreso,Bad results from
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the majority
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of
students
in the classroom.
Therefore
,School room in learning should be encouraged in Educational settings.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • progressively
  • substituted
  • prevalent
  • crucial
  • enhance
  • support
  • guidance
  • interaction
  • personal touch
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