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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of the time, classroom teachers will be totally substited for technology. So you agree or disagree

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Recently, the use of machinery is now becoming increasingly in the world as some group of people believes that the machinery will be used in
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 of classroom teachers. I totally disagree with
this
due to
 the fact that the technology can not represent human beings
due to
 the fact that it can not demonstrate
while
 teaching and
also
 where apply emotional care can not be rendered by computer.
This
 will be
further
 explained in the subsequent paragraph with relevant examples.
Firstly
, tutors are known for comprehensive teaching that entails demonstrating, examples guiding and corrections in a few to mention,
for instance
, individual learners with
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different ways of assimilation and adaptive stress mechanism,
for
this
 reason, when the lecturer noticed
this
 he or she will be able to render help apply the pupils as case arise.
for instance
 a trainee who was down with the stress can easily be noticed by the teacher and
thus
 helps to come into the pupils aids.
Furthermore
, the lecturer should
be involve
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 in
caring
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 aspect of
learner
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 but not only teaching.
In particular
 for special students that need special
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care
.
For instance
, a trainee that has a bitter experience
as a result
 of violence will definitely need emotional responsibility which will be
in contrast
 to what the computer will likely take the responsibility of
To sum up
, I disagree with the opinion that
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technology will take up the position of classroom teachers because the teacher has the ability to teach and demonstrate and can
also
 teach the learner by taking care of them emotionally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • progressively
  • substituted
  • prevalent
  • crucial
  • enhance
  • support
  • guidance
  • interaction
  • personal touch
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