The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart compares the percentages of the elderly
population
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in the
USA
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,
Sweden
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, and
Japan
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from 1940 and it
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gives a projection ò the
ratio
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of senior
citizens
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in these countries till 2040.
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,
it is clear that
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till 1990 the proportion of aged people in the
USA
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was higher than that of
Japan
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and
Sweden
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. After 2000,
this
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ratio
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in
Sweden
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went higher than that of the
USA
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and
Japan
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.
Japan
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is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its elderly
population
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and projected that the Japanese elderly
population
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will rise dramatically in the coming decades. In detail, around 9%
population
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in the
USA
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was 65 or older in 1940.
This
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ratio
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increased to 15% after four decades but after 1990, it declined by 1% and remained stable. It is estimated that around 23% of
citizens
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in the
USA
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will be either 65 or older in 2040. The percentage of Swedish elder people was 7% in 1940, and it rose gradually and exceeded the
USA
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's proportion of senior
citizens
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in 1990. In 2040, one in every five Swedish would be 65 or older.
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, 5% of Japanese were 65 or above in 1940 and the
ratio
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declined and remained stable between 1960 and 1985. It soared by 2%
afterward
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and
then
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climbed steadily. It is predicted that more than one-quarter Japanese
population
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would be older
citizens
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in 2040 and
this
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ratio
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would be higher than that of the
USA
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and
Sweden
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, usa, sweden, japan, ratio, citizens with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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