The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart compares the percentages of the elderly
population
in the
USA
,
Sweden
, and
Japan
from 1940 and it
also
gives a projection ò the
ratio
of senior
citizens
in these countries till 2040.
Overall
,
it is clear that
till 1990 the proportion of aged people in the
USA
was higher than that of
Japan
and
Sweden
. After 2000,
this
ratio
in
Sweden
went higher than that of the
USA
and
Japan
.
Japan
is expected to see the most dramatic changes in its elderly
population
and projected that the Japanese elderly
population
will rise dramatically in the coming decades. In detail, around 9%
population
in the
USA
was 65 or older in 1940.
This
ratio
increased to 15% after four decades but after 1990, it declined by 1% and remained stable. It is estimated that around 23% of
citizens
in the
USA
will be either 65 or older in 2040. The percentage of Swedish elder people was 7% in 1940, and it rose gradually and exceeded the
USA
's proportion of senior
citizens
in 1990. In 2040, one in every five Swedish would be 65 or older.
Besides
, 5% of Japanese were 65 or above in 1940 and the
ratio
declined and remained stable between 1960 and 1985. It soared by 2%
afterward
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and
then
climbed steadily. It is predicted that more than one-quarter Japanese
population
would be older
citizens
in 2040 and
this
ratio
would be higher than that of the
USA
and
Sweden
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, usa, sweden, japan, ratio, citizens with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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