The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagrams illustrate some planned development in the future taking place in the central area of Islip residential area. The housing zone in the Southern will still nearly remained
The most noticeable transformation is the construction of the new ring
town
.
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Overall
, it is obvious that the area witnessed dramatic changes during that period. Linking Words
In addition
, the extension of the Islip Linking Words
town
will be accompanied by the appearance of many amenities.
It can be seen that some places in the South of the Use synonyms
town
still remain undisturbed. The school in the future will be still located to the west ofUse synonyms
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the
road
surrounding the Use synonyms
town
centre. Currently, there is a row of shops along both sides of the main Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
However
, in the plan, the shops which are on its northern side will be demolished to make way for the bus stop, shopping mall, Linking Words
car
park and especially there will be Correct word choice
and car
also
a new housing constructed which connect with the ring Linking Words
road
by a minor Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
In addition
, Linking Words
according to
the development plan, a new pedestrian precinct will be erected to replace the present major Linking Words
road
. The park will be Use synonyms
also
made smaller in order to make way for more housing in the bottom east-south of the ring Linking Words
road
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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