The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagrams illustrate some planned development in the future taking place in the central area of Islip
town
.
Overall
, it is obvious that the area witnessed dramatic changes during that period.
In addition
, the extension of the Islip
town
will be accompanied by the appearance of many amenities. It can be seen that some places in the South of the
town
still remain undisturbed. The school in the future will be still located to the west of
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residential area. The housing zone in the Southern will still nearly remained The most noticeable transformation is the construction of the new ring
road
surrounding the
town
centre. Currently, there is a row of shops along both sides of the main
road
.
However
, in the plan, the shops which are on its northern side will be demolished to make way for the bus stop, shopping mall,
car
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and car
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park and especially there will be
also
a new housing constructed which connect with the ring
road
by a minor
road
.
In addition
,
according to
the development plan, a new pedestrian precinct will be erected to replace the present major
road
. The park will be
also
made smaller in order to make way for more housing in the bottom east-south of the ring
road
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pedestrian-only zone
  • dual carriageway
  • current
  • surrounded by
  • propose
  • infrastructure
  • bus station
  • car park
  • residential housing
  • traffic flow
  • connectivity
  • green spaces
  • recreational areas
  • development plans
  • main features
  • town center
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