You would like to be work in a different city to be closer to your family. Write a letter to your employer to request a transfer to another office. In the letter: - Explain why you would like to move - Request that your employer place you in a specific city - Request that it be completed by a certain date Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter regards to request you to transfer my job to another city near to my family. First of all, the reason why I want to move to another office is several.

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, my parents will be going abroad

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month, and my wife will live alone after that so, I would like to transfer my job to that city.

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, I want to eat healthy home food now as I am bored with eating fast foods and other street foods. Specifically, I would like to move to a specific city called 'Gandhinagar' as I want to live with my wife. I got some positive feedback about Gandhinagar that it is a good place to live

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its atmosphere and its services.

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, I

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want another request

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it possible to complete

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transfer process before my parents live abroad? It is better to join the company in the next month. I hope to receive a positive reply. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

172 words

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