The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps given
depicts
an Industrial Correct subject-verb agreement
depict
area
in the town
of Norbiton currently and the planned future development for the town
. Overall
, the factory would be replaced by housing and the shops, medical centre, school and playground would be built in future. In addition
, there would be additional
road in Correct article usage
an additional
north
which will cross the river in Farmland
First of all, the Add an article
the north
currently
map shows only Change the adverb
current
factory
which is the only one Correct article usage
the factory
that is
available in Norbiton industrial area
. The area
have
8 factories Change the verb form
has
that
3 of them are built surrounding the circle Correct word choice
and
area
. Moreover
, there is no any
development near the river which Correct quantifier usage
apply
connecting
to the other Change the form of the verb
connects
town
.
Turning to planned future development, the town
augmenting
Wrong verb form
augment
new
road from Correct article usage
a new
south
which would be built above the river to bridge to the farmland and Add an article
the south
also
the east askew road that connected to the circle in the middle. Furthermore
, there will no
more factories and be replaced by housing including Add a missing verb
be no
with
Change preposition
apply
the
facilities near the house.Correct article usage
apply
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