The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphs show the changes in the figure for sources and the distribution of
police
income in British between 2017 to 2018.
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It is clear that
the National government is the primary(main) source of the (冠词)Linking Words
police
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budget
and the dominant(拼写) trend is almost the same in the next Use synonyms
year
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Additionally
, the government department spent most of the Linking Words
police
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budget
on salaries from 2017 and 2018.
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Firstly
, the national government is evaluated as the most crucial source of the Linking Words
police
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budget
at 175.5 Use synonyms
million
in 2017. The number grew slightly to 177.8 Use synonyms
million
in the next Use synonyms
year
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In addition
, the second greatest source is local taxes, with 91.2 Linking Words
million
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year
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figure increased to 102.3 Linking Words
million
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year
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, the other sources of the Linking Words
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budget
are almost the same at around 38 Use synonyms
million
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Apparently, regarding the approach of the Use synonyms
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budget
, we can see that much money was invested in salaries, up to 75 per cent of the total spending in 2017, Use synonyms
then
fell slightly to 69 per cent in 2018. Linking Words
Additionally
, in 2017 about 8 per cent of the cost went into technology, Linking Words
while
in 2018 was almost twice that. Linking Words
Finally
, we can see a similarity costs of buildings and transport at 17%.Linking Words
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, year, million with synonyms.
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