In the graph below, we have graph that shows in percentage changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the United Kingdom.
In the
graph
below, we have graph
that shows in percentage changing patterns of domestic Add an article
a graph
access
to modern technology in homes in the United Kingdom.
Generally, it has different patterns that shows
some technological tendencies within a certain period. More clearly, the Change the verb form
show
graph
starts from
1996 and ends Change preposition
in
on
2003, on another dimension of the Change preposition
in
graph
it has percentage
from zero to 100 %. There are four positions of technology, which are CD player, Mobile phone, Home computer and Internet Correct article usage
a percentage
access
.
The most popular technology is the CD player which growth
from 60 % to 80 plus from 1996 to 2003, and the diagonal line is quite straight. On the opposite side to the highest point located in the chart is Internet Replace the word
grew
access
. In addition
, it rises only to about 40 % of all chart
. Fix the agreement mistake
charts
Nevertheless
, the interesting fact, that
Add a missing verb
is that
the
Internet Correct article usage
apply
access
is the only point that starts from 1998 and it means that we can see when it has invented or started
be in use in the UK.
The Add the particle
tostarted
last
two points have average levels, but the dynamic changing line of mobile phone
shows that it has more popular at Fix the agreement mistake
phones
the
specific period, but sometimes not. Correct article usage
a
In addition
, it is less popular from
CD Change preposition
than
player
Fix the agreement mistake
players
to
10-15 %. Change preposition
apply
Home
computer is on 3d place in our chart and it like the average technology-growing straight and fastAdd an article
The home
A home
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