Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools.Others,however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.

Nowadays,a lot of people want their
boys
and
girls
studying
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in mixed
schools
is rarely increasing Some parents believe it is better to study
boys
and
girls
in separate
schools
than mixed
schools
.In my
opinion
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boys
and
girls
are studying in separate
schools
is better than others.I will discuss these views
in
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the
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below. Mixed
schools
are very little
useful
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for
boys
and
girls
.Because
boys
and
girls
has
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a lot of problem in
mixed
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school.
Boys
and
girls
are always
compate
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compete
with each other in lessons.
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in
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physical education is compared with
boys
and
girls
of exercise.When
teacher
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says
to
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the to
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children play volleyball
girls
are against
boys
as a result
they
compate
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compete
complete
compare
. Separate
schools
are working
some
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country
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.
For example
India.Because separate
schools
are very useful for
boys
and
girls
.
Boys
and
girls
don't shy when they get on the board or their teacher asks them about previous topics children always remember their topics.
Also
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they always choose the best way to
to
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for example
last
month I saw
in
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the internet.A boy in
the
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separate school
was
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created a new robot from waste material.So I choose the best way to study for
boys
and
girls
in separate
schools
.
To sum up
,
this days
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some people want their children
is
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are
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studying in separate
schools
than
mixed
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in mixed
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schools
.Because separate
schools
is
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are
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better than mixed
schools
.
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  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
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  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
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