Some people think it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools.Others,however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.
Nowadays,a lot of people want their
boys
and girls
studying
in mixed Change the verb form
to study
schools
is rarely increasing Some parents believe it is better to study boys
and girls
in separate schools
than mixed schools
.In my opinion
Add a comma
,opinion
boys
and girls
are studying in separate schools
is better than others.I will discuss these views in
Change preposition
apply
the
below.
Mixed Correct article usage
apply
schools
are very little useful
for Replace the word
use
boys
and girls
.Because boys
and girls
has
a lot of problem in Change the verb form
have
mixed
school.Add an article
a mixed
Boys
and girls
are always compate
with each other in lessons.Correct your spelling
compete
For example
in
physical education is compared with Change preposition
apply
boys
and girls
of exercise.When teacher
says Add an article
the teacher
a teacher
to
children play volleyball Correct article usage
the to
girls
are against boys
as a result
they compate
.
Separate Correct your spelling
compete
complete
compare
schools
are working some
Change preposition
in some
country
.Fix the agreement mistake
countries
For example
India.Because separate schools
are very useful for boys
and girls
.Boys
and girls
don't shy when they get on the board or their teacher asks them about previous topics children always remember their topics.Also
they always choose the best way to Add a comma
,Also
to
Correct your spelling
go
for example
last
month I saw in
the internet.A boy in Change preposition
on
the
separate school Correct article usage
a
was
created a new robot from waste material.So I choose the best way to study for Unnecessary verb
apply
boys
and girls
in separate schools
.
To sum up
,this days
some people want their children Change the determiner
this day
these days
is
studying in separate Change the verb form
are
schools
than mixed
Change preposition
in mixed
schools
.Because separate schools
is
better than mixed Change the verb form
are
schools
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- Conclusion
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- One possible drawback...
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