The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.
The presented bar charts above illustrate the information related to both
students
, namely home and international, who were studying Computer Science at a UK university in the period of time from 2010 to 2012 respectively.
To begin
with, it is crucial to mention that the difference between men and women students
is truly huge. In order to men, it is evident that in 2010 the largest number
of them were studying as British home students
. The number
of them is approximately 40. Notwithstanding, the number
substantially decreased in 2011.
In order to international students
, the largest proportion
of them was in 2012. To be more specific, there is approximately 40 students
, who were studying.
To delve into the women's bar chart, it is essential to emphasise that the proportion
of British home students
was not dramatically, but higher than the proportion
of the above-mentioned sex. The largest number
was in 2011 and 2012. Regarding the international students
, there is an insignificant difference between 3 different years, nonetheless
the smallest proportion
was in 2010 and the highest in 2012 respectively.Submitted by mishynadiana on
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