The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.
The line graph compares the proportion of export from Australia to 4 different nations, including India, Japan,
China
and Use synonyms
US
for a period of 22 years.
Correct article usage
the US
It is clear that
total Linking Words
exports
to Use synonyms
China
and India saw a noticeable rise, Use synonyms
while
US and Linking Words
Japanese
export declined rapidly. By the end of the period, Chinese Use synonyms
exports
were by far the highest ones, followed by Use synonyms
Japanese
, Americans, and Use synonyms
at the end
, Indian ones.
In 1990, Linking Words
Japanese
Use synonyms
exports
were significantly higher than other nations, Use synonyms
with
approximately 27%. Change preposition
by
However
, Indian Linking Words
figure
were the lowest amount among all, exporting at a negligible amount. Fix the agreement mistake
figures
While
Linking Words
China
received only under 5% of Use synonyms
exports
, the equivalent figure for America was more than 10%, almost 11%.
Between 1990 and 2010, Use synonyms
Japanese
Use synonyms
exports
declined rapidly from almost 27% to under 20%. Use synonyms
Also
, Linking Words
American
proportion of explores fluctuated and Correct article usage
the American
finally
decreased to 6%. Linking Words
In contrast
, the figures for both nations, Linking Words
China
and India, saw a considerable increase Use synonyms
about
29% and 5%, respectively, by 2012.Change preposition
of about
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