Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people are of the notion that manufacturers and supermarkets should bring down the

cost

involved in the packaging of

goods

whereas

, others believe consumers should flee from

goods

that

has

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so much packaging.

Although

,

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I believe packaging attracts

the

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buyers to buy more, it

however

is a choice and customers should avoid

goods

that

costs

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more. Generally, most businesses take conscious note

on

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the way their

goods

appear to the public, sight is the first part to initiate attention

of

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a particular good and

therefore

, they take note of the way they present their

goods

and the only way to portray

this

is through proper packaging. These exterior

look

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can be quite expensive and many manufacturers will still do

this

to attract good buyers, they should reduce the

cost

of these packaging to allow less privileged to access it.

Nevertheless

, customers should avoid

goods

with a lot of packaging to cut down

cost

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. These

goods

are more expensive because of the

cost

involved and the consumers

has

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the option to pick.

For instance

, cassava flakes in the regular market can

cost

500naira per kg

whereas

, the supermarkets will charge triple,

this

is because they are sealed and labelled. The customers should leave those

goods

and buy the more affordable

one

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. In conclusion, I firmly believe manufacturers and supermarkets should reduce the amount of packaging,

however

, consumers can

also

avoid them.